domingo, 12 de julio de 2009

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Paragraph 1: Introduction and description of the chocolate kiss

Paragraph 2: The history of the chocolate

Paragraph 3: The Hershey's Park

Paragraph 4: The Hershey's most famouse stores

Paragraph 5: Measurements of the kiss, bag sizes and comparison between milk and dark chocolate

Paragraph 6: Worlds largest kiss

Paragraph 7: Fun facts and conclusion

2 comentarios:

  1. Hola Daniela,

    Your outline seems to be good the only thing is that you did not post an updated thesis statement in your outline which should cover all the paragraphs in your outline.

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  2. I think that you chose a really good topic, and I like what u decided to talk about for your paragraphs. I want to read this paper, I love Hershey Kisses!

    Steven

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