Grammar Questions...

1. How do you write in a formal essay the money number? spelled out or just put the number

2. Do i have to put a comma after an and whaen im writting about more than three things in the same sentance?

3. Should I spell out US in a formal essay?

Animal experimentation Article from PETA

Animals are not our to experiment on!!
http://www.petaasiapacific.com/issues-nottoexperiment.asp

Paper 2

I saw the vidio Haze and dicided to do my paper of alchohol abuse in colleges. I got a good article from the New York Times titled "Binge Drinking on Campus"
this is the link:http://www.nytimes.com/2009/07/01/opinion/01wed3.html?_r=2

New Thesis

This paper will discuss the history of the Hershey’s kisses, how the kisses got their name, the most popular Hershey’s stores, the national Hershey’s theme park and why people love the chocolate kisses so much.

Paragraphs

Paragraph 1: Introduction and description of the chocolate kiss

Paragraph 2: The history of the chocolate

Paragraph 3: The Hershey's Park

Paragraph 4: The Hershey's most famouse stores

Paragraph 5: Measurements of the kiss, bag sizes and comparison between milk and dark chocolate

Paragraph 6: Worlds largest kiss

Paragraph 7: Fun facts and conclusion

Work Citation

http://www.socyberty.com/History/Hershey-Kiss-History.11228

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/330141/fun_facts_about_hersheys_chocolate.html?cat=22

http://www.hersheys.com/kisses/about/funfacts.asp

Hershey's Chocolate Kisses

Thesis: This paper will discuss the history of the Hershey’s kisses, the kisses today and some interesting fun facts.